She hurt me(Revised)

by Fsams   Feb 28, 2007


Through out all these years
She gave me only tears
Each and everyday
Sorrows on my way

I dreamed her as my wife
I thought to live a life
But nothing came true
What else can I do?

She left me in this world
For what she never told
Do I have to mourn?
For leaving me alone

Does she have to go?
There's no reason for
Her shadow in my mind
Had made me sheer blind

But how could this be?
She had hurt me
Leaving me in plead
For nothing indeed

Written by Fsams
20/07/2006
22:30

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    Lovely n very emotional.
    i love the words n flow. tc

  • 17 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    This was a pretty good but I have to say I'm not sure I like the ending. The way it's worded it almost too difficult to understand. It's not a bad poem though, I give you a 4 out of 5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem
    again
    this is my fav of the three i have read so far
    but three is gonna be all i read for now
    i shall try to read more later
    but good job on these three
    hope you keep writing for a while
    think you could be big

    Keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem is excellent. Atmosphere that you created is superb, third and fourth stanzas are greatest. Topic is also good. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Does she has to go?
    [[Does she {have} to go. Grammar.]]

    Anyways, this was interesting. One of your better poems.
    The wording was unquie as was the emotion I actually felt.
    Nicely done here, Fsams.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

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