Really pretty, and smooth like the others.

~*Alex*~

I think this is one of the best of your works. Great 5.5 worth. try revising a little

Hmm...interesting. It flows fairly smooth. I love the last line which ends it nicely. Even though the beginning didn't have the intensity the rest reveals it does start it off well. In case you care, in the third stanza 'She left me lone in this world' I'm thinking 'lone' is 'alone'. Other than that not much to say except it's actually a cool write. Do like the emotion that plays out in the last stanza as well.
~Faith-less

Superb dear I like your emotions and expressons.

Very nicely written and well explained feelings. Great keep up the work.

"Through out"
Throughout can be one word, I don't know if you care, just mentioning it.

"Does she has to go?"
have, not has

"Had made me sheer blind"
This doesn't work. Sheer doesn't mix well with the word blind, utterly sounds better. The problem probably lies with the fact that as an adjective, sheer is limited in usage.

If you want my personal opinion of the poem, I'd say that it's rather dry on interesting imagery. It says a lot, but it says it in a very direct and non-poetic manner. I found the AABB rhyme scheme and short lines grating and overly simplistic.

Does she has to go?
[[Does she {have} to go. Grammar.]]

Anyways, this was interesting. One of your better poems.
The wording was unquie as was the emotion I actually felt.
Nicely done here, Fsams.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

This poem is excellent. Atmosphere that you created is superb, third and fourth stanzas are greatest. Topic is also good. 5/5

Great poem
again
this is my fav of the three i have read so far
but three is gonna be all i read for now
i shall try to read more later
but good job on these three
hope you keep writing for a while
think you could be big

Keenan

This was a pretty good but I have to say I'm not sure I like the ending. The way it's worded it almost too difficult to understand. It's not a bad poem though, I give you a 4 out of 5.

Lovely n very emotional.
i love the words n flow. tc