Comments : Please Don't Leave , Save The Sad Goodbye

  • 17 years ago

    by JASON

    Love your work as well i know what you mean for this is how i feel right now...ty for taking time to read my poem an voting :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    This is such a beautiful poem NobodyKnows, you have no idea how much I admire your work! I actually looked at this poem along time ago, before I even joined this website, but since I joined... I never got around to commenting on it.
    I love this stanza the most:
    "You'll take my heart with you if you leave,
    But that I can live without, but you I can't, I don't believe,
    I thought my love was enough to keep you here with me,
    But I was wrong, that's not how it's going to be."

    That part was the one that definitely took my breath away.. I love the way you word your sentences, you don't leave the reader confused on anything either. Great job hun, please keep up the good work.. I'd be sad if I found out you weren't making other wonderful creations like this one. 5/5 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Fantastic job.. wonderful choice of of words.. i love the title.. :D

  • 17 years ago

    by paul alexander

    I lthink this is good i really like it, keep on writing

  • 17 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Omg! im in tears... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    You can really see how much this guy meant to you you did a great job writing it<33

  • 17 years ago

    by halie

    I love this ur rlly good

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    This is really good! Filled with lots of emotion. You have a great talent.