Wow Rachel.....this is awesome! Love all the beautiful imagery....can actually feel the breeze in the moonlight! Great job!!!!5/5

Rachel
I was so glad to see a new poem :)
and it is so beautiful...Love the picture you have painted with your words.
Excellent! Love Cindy

That was so beautiful. You have a great selection of words.

Excellent.

This flowed wonderfully dear, it was a pleasant read. I loved the mental picture that came into my mind. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

"The stars they twinkle far away,
Loving night, wish it could stay."

A beautiful couplet. The whole poem was just so gorgeous.
Teamed with the fluid like flow, it's a fab piece
5/5
*Gem*

A beautifully worded poem, nice work

A bit crowded, but nice none the less.

Woops, mean't to also say 5/5 :P