ROBERT KERRY GARDINER ....I FOR ONE CONCUR. IT IS A LOVELY PIECE OF WORK, YET THE FRET ON LOVE OR THE LACK OF IS AN IMMANENT OCCURRENCE WAITING TO HAPPEN.

Excellent poem ,love the write good point all the way through:the world is not a perfect place it will never be a perfect place its always bad
we have war and hunger... the world and is not perfect no one is perfect and no one will be perfect not in this life time or any other so just deal with it and move on ~~5/5 your friend Tracy

Written very well. I loved this poem. Keep up the great work 5/5
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