Very good. i like it alot. 5/5

Oh D....this poem tho sad was very well written. So much emotion poured into this poem. The imagery was sad, yet uplifting as the reader has the ability to move on with you through your words. We are all here for you anytime you need us!

Wow Darien that was incredible. I could feel the tares in your heart as I read it. I could feel all the hurt and pain your pored into those words and they are wonderful. Negative experiences, though they bite and feel bitter long afterward, can also help us go one step closer to who we want to be, or at least I think so. It makes you stronger and wiser from a bit of hard experience. Again, an amazing poem Darien.

-Eleesa

Aaah this is heartbreaking... The imagery was fantastic!

"You've got those cursed tasteless lips
That chapped to the touch of a real kiss"
^^^ Love the wording here. Excellent, yet sad piece.

Whoa, this is a good one. I loved it! It didn't have to rhyme to convey such feelings. The way it flowed and the wording was awesome.
Fav line:
Last night I wrote a poem for you princess

I don't know why, but I love it!
5/5
Ciao

I really like this one, I'm sorry about that girl.

Darien this is utterly amazing. the raw emotion and love, thought it is probably fiction from your stand...it still hits close to home for anyone who has ever loved someone and had them love another. beautfully written!!
5/5

Nicely done. Love the imagery....

"You've got those cursed tasteless lips
That chapped to the touch of a real kiss"

Awesome lines! All the best, Debbie

Darieeeeen.

Oh boy. This piece was, by far, MY FAVORITE, of your pieces. Ever. No lie. Ahh. Where to start, eh? Well, amazing flow, grand structure. The piece fit perfectly together. You didn't throw in small details like everyone else does, just to make a poem longer. =sighs= I was hooked right from the title. OHYESIWAS.

Being a senior member =beams= I was scanning through contest nominations, I saw the title, and I just HAD to read this. So as I read, the way I read and pronounce things, this pieced rhymed, and di not rhyme, simultaneously! Astounding, babe.

Collecting all the things we once had
Material possessions and faded memories
The pictures are torn down the middle
And thrown into an open fire to burn

^^ My favorite stanza. Write more. I look forward to reading more of your poems. [:

Stina.x

Was an amazing poem and an emotional yet gentle way to tell your girl goodbye
i thought it was amazing

Sad but angery what a mix. amazing how u ended with a peaceful:)

This is amazing.. I can feel all the anger and frustration and hurt yet it didn't come out in a spiteful way like u wished harm on this person, only that you wanted it to stop and now you just want them to leave. Wonderful I really liked this.

This is great-and so reminiscent of some 'last poems' I have wrote myself in attempts to bring closure. Burning pictures, letters, memories is like a freeing exorcism of what once was. This poem has sadness, love, loss, despair and yet also determination and hope. It is written well with excellent flow, well expressed emotion and an ending reassuring that life (and love) goes on and you seem prepared to meet the future with that in mind and heart. Very touching.
Peace, Love, Poetry & Power,
Gary Jurechka

Extremely amazing.
This is the first piece of writing I've read by you. Personally, I'm left speechless & rare does that ever happen. It was extremely well penned. & now I'm off to read the rest of your poems. Because I really loved this one. Reminds me of something I did to an ex. You're an amazing writer, keep up the great work.
-Heather

There, I saw your face in the fireplace
As it melted to the touch of the flames
I smile to myself as your body deforms
When the photographic paper crumples up

^ OMG.. I loved that.. So beautiful. I can see this all in my head..

This was so very strong. I could feel the anger & hurt in this. Wow. So powerful, hun.

As my back turns to your face I walk away
^ This line kinda threw me off.. I think it'd flow better if you put a comma [,] after face. That's just me though :]

Beautifully penned, hun.

Bri [x]

You are so strong, my dear. This is very heartfelt and moving - truly a majestic tribute to surviving.

My breathe has been taken away this is a fantasic piece, deep and meaningful yet full of sorrow and lost love, a subject that appeals to me for many reasons, again a wonderfully expressed poem all the best take care lithium.

This poem has a lot of emotion but it is all around beautiful

Oh wow...this is so...emotion is extremely strong nice work....5/5

Oh wow...this is so...emotion is extremely strong nice work....5/5