Comments : The Last Poem I Will Ever Write For Her

  • 17 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    This is late, but this poem definitely gets a high five from me!

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Last night I wrote a poem for you princess
    I left it under your pillow while you slept
    I coated it in tears and signed it in blood
    For the girl I once loved, but loved another

    excellent piece of work.. you have talant i liked ur poem. and i have added you in my favourites. take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Colby

    Could be much much better if you made it rhymed but still good. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    Well its been a while since ive read one of your poems... but theyre the same as i remember. AWESOMELY TERRIFIC!!! seriously, youre a great poet. i cant say it made me cry however, i rarely cry anymore... still, good poem.

    5/5
    Allanah

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This poem was good it had a lot of raw emotion like you were hurt way beyond what u deserved and thats not acceptable i think but this was well written and it was very thought out great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    OMG!!!!!!! I was shocked! My mouth dropped while reading your poem! I'll definetly put this in my favorite poems! 5/5! WOW WOW! I can relate to your poem.. anyway TC! I wish I'll be as good as you someday!!

  • 17 years ago

    by felisha

    That is awsome. You really gave me some chillies.

  • 15 years ago

    by Poe Syndrome

    Excellent poem! keep writing your poetry is amazing!