by Rahl The Layman Lord Feb 28, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
My thoughts |
Great flow. I could relate alot. Very unique. |
I love ur style its so maazing...keep ti up and plesae feel free to comment some of mine as well that would be greatly appreciated...keep up the great work |
by Daz Mellow
Man, you are totes making mew swoon. lol great details and wording. On a scale of 1-10 this is like 11, but the highest is 5 so. lol Great job. |
*your jewled eyes* thats wonderful imagery...nice jobb. and i love your style its so unique...nice jobb keep it up. 5/5 |
by firexdancer
This is such a beautiful poem, 5/5 |