Where Did We Go?

by Tricky Daze   Feb 28, 2007


I'm looking at that photograph we smiled to each other
And looking so happy,looking like a new wed
But nowadays everybody got strange to everyone
Everyone is being so heartless to even loved ones

Everything's improving,everything's different
But why do anybody needs to change?
That's what is wrong,we have to learn
To stay ourself and hold life and love tightly
That's how you will understand this world's worthy

Then you came to me,in my mind a lot of thought
You just held me down with your faint face
I understood there left no Us,just he and me
When i tried to explain this to him,he just walked away
I wonder if he even thought about my question to him
I asked while he was leaving
"Where did we go?"

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  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    This poem didnt grasp me like others do. i found it a little hard to get into

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Such a sad, sad love story, wonderful read and there are a few errors as menchened above, great at showing emotion and it truly is from your heart.

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Awh. Such a sad, sad love story! But it was really good. It flowed pretty well. & Nothing seemed forced. I can deffinitley tell it was from the heart. It had a lot of emotion in it, as well.

    But why do anybody needs to change?

    ^ I think that should be rephrased to 'But why does anybody need to change?'

    And there are a few grammatically incorrect sentences.

    But I still thought it was really good.

    Beautifully penned. Keep it up.

    Bri.x

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww this is such a sad poem, but I can tell it came from your heart. I defiantly know how this feels! You are such a talented writer! 5/5

    ~Kristina

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