Broken Bond

by Startle Me   Feb 28, 2007


What changed between
Talkative us is no more
The heart once was opened
Is now locked alike a door

Different it is now
No more bond between
Sad eyes upon faces
Lonely tears cannot be seen

Hearts gnashing away
Shattering into little pieces
Crumbling and decaying
As the heart slowly decreases

Yet wishing for the days
When this was all at fault
Happy we were back then
Until our love abruptly halt

Looked down upon you do
Saddening it is to know
No more us will there be
The broken bond will grow

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  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Heh heh. Sorry about taht.
    Do you mean
    Commas on the poem
    Or commas on the comment I sent?
    But Meghan, thank you for the support

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I love this poem.. very clever idea... the whole broken bond will grow line... great job... you describe your emotion well... my only suggestion is to add commas because it was a little difficult to read because i wasnt sure when to pause :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Meghan Sprague

    This is a pretty good poem. Thank you for commenting on my poems. If this is what you are really feeling i know what you're going through. If you ever wanna talk email me.... meghan_sprague13@hotmail.com

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