This is a pretty good poem. Thank you for commenting on my poems. If this is what you are really feeling i know what you're going through. If you ever wanna talk email me.... meghan_sprague13@hotmail.com

I love this poem.. very clever idea... the whole broken bond will grow line... great job... you describe your emotion well... my only suggestion is to add commas because it was a little difficult to read because i wasnt sure when to pause :D

Heh heh. Sorry about taht.
Do you mean
Commas on the poem
Or commas on the comment I sent?
But Meghan, thank you for the support