The habit

by Once an Angel   Feb 28, 2007


I am the acidic poison,

burning in your wounds.

Throbbing through your veins,

just like last night's booze.

Echoing inside your mind,

as a bright red scream.

Drowning down your voice,

that cries out in pain.

Reopening the cycle,

starting it all over again.

I am the thorny vine,

that's strangling your soul.

twisting my way up your body,

inching closer to my goal.

No one else can see me,

because I living inside your head.

Reminding you of your insanity,

calling you to join the dead.

Deny me all you want to,

but I will still be waiting here.

You will return to me like always,

cowardly chained by your darkest fear.

Well, this poem is kind of hard to understand, unless you know the reasons behind it which are sort of private. So, I suppose posting it here might not be so advantageous. Maybe you will be able to find a meaning behind it for you.

Huggles,
Eleesa

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  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey, first of all i just wanted to thank you for your comments on my poems and the advice you gave. Ill keep a look out for that book or ill reserve it in the libary. Anywyas about your poem, i know you may not think that anyone else would be able to reelate to it, many people use there own experiances and can take some sort of meaning out of it. I can sort of relate to this, i love the metaphor youve used in it. The rhythem of it is wonderful, and it creates a good strong flow. Your word choice was great and made a wonderful poem which holds alot of meaning behind it. This makes it very very powerful. I really enjoyed this, it showed great talent, keep writing! Thanks again for the advice. Take care xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kat

    Well i think i know what it means well to me it remindes me of well i was diagosed with type one manic depressive witch means im manic and it will always be there know matter what i do

    VERY WELL WRITTEN
    KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

  • 17 years ago

    by Kat

    Well i think i know what it means well to me it remindes me of well i was diagosed with type one manic depressive witch means im manic and it will always be there know matter what i do

    VERY WELL WRITTEN
    KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

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