Well i think i know what it means well to me it remindes me of well i was diagosed with type one manic depressive witch means im manic and it will always be there know matter what i do

VERY WELL WRITTEN
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

Well i think i know what it means well to me it remindes me of well i was diagosed with type one manic depressive witch means im manic and it will always be there know matter what i do

VERY WELL WRITTEN
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

Hey, first of all i just wanted to thank you for your comments on my poems and the advice you gave. Ill keep a look out for that book or ill reserve it in the libary. Anywyas about your poem, i know you may not think that anyone else would be able to reelate to it, many people use there own experiances and can take some sort of meaning out of it. I can sort of relate to this, i love the metaphor youve used in it. The rhythem of it is wonderful, and it creates a good strong flow. Your word choice was great and made a wonderful poem which holds alot of meaning behind it. This makes it very very powerful. I really enjoyed this, it showed great talent, keep writing! Thanks again for the advice. Take care xx