Opps

by crying and dieing inside   Feb 28, 2007


He said it tore
after he swore
now she's worried
as he hurrys
ther rush to get the box
but its locked
now they'll have to wait
and believe its fate

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  • 17 years ago

    by crying and dieing inside

    Hey thanks for the commet yeah it dont really make sense it's made to make people think and see if it realtes to something in their life you should red some of my others

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Hmm... I didn't really understand this poem. And that's good. Because usually most of the poet's poems don't make sense except for the person who made. I'll give you what I thought it was about. Was it about a guy and a girl about to have sex, and the guy blew it before he went it? Heh heh. That happened to me. Anywayz, check out some of my poems. Comment or vote on them if you like.

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