Chained to regrets,,*

by Catastrophic Beauty   Feb 28, 2007


This poem is resubmitted
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He's chained to his own regrets
And she's bleeding on the floor
Lost in her intricate thoughts
She just can't take it anymore

She needs to know he loves her
But he is choking on fatal lies
And her dazed mind can't grasp
The truth shown through his eyes

Her heart is calling out to him
And he knows that she's the one
But it's too late for anything now
Because her life is almost done

She is covered in subtle aromas
As he tries to escape to the door
But he's chained to his regrets
And she's bleeding on the floor

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  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    The one thing that i would change is the asking for comments
    otherwise this i my fav from you
    5

  • 17 years ago

    by Laurie Tran

    I love your word choice .
    it helped make the poem darker .

    excellent job .

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    I love the message in this and the poem in general is absolutely beautiful. You're an amazing poet.
    (and thanks for emailing me by the way :D )
    <3Raych

  • 17 years ago

    by A New Beginning

    Great job. it's sad and shows a lot of emotion. i enjoyed it, keep up the awesome work!

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