Great job. it's sad and shows a lot of emotion. i enjoyed it, keep up the awesome work!

I love the message in this and the poem in general is absolutely beautiful. You're an amazing poet.
(and thanks for emailing me by the way :D )
<3Raych

I love your word choice .
it helped make the poem darker .

excellent job .

The one thing that i would change is the asking for comments
otherwise this i my fav from you
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