by debbylyn Mar 1, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Blackened sun in empty night |
by Jenni Marie
"Desiring what can never be, surrendering loss to destiny" <-- oh how i loved those lines. so much emotion and power. this was a beautiful follow up from part one. the imagery portrayed in this is stunning. coupled with a flawless flow and written with such beauty and grace, you outdid yourself here. as for the ending, what can I say? it was amazing. in my opinion, this is superior to part one, and i'm certainly looking forward to reading part three. |
by Rachel RTVW
I love this poem!!!!! |
by Gem
Oh wow Debbie... |
by Barry
"Close your eyes, inhale my thoughts |
This poem is really awesome. Very descriptive and heartfelt. Loved it. |