Debbylyn
This poem is beautiful...the words you have used sing through out this write.

Prayers unanswered heaven weeps
As pouring drops the sadness seeps
The Mystic wanders lost once more
To search another distant shore

This stanza brought tears to my eyes.
Love you sis.

Debbie, I don't know what to say. I absolutely love this poem. I'm just speechless. I hate not having anything to say. ;P. Amazing write. Please, never stop!! Love always,

-` Liz

This is really awesome.

Exhale my longing take my all
Your patterns dance as moonlight falls
Fate's fickle hand has had her way
My Angel come to me I pray

complete poem is really outstanding and i think this one deserves to be a winner for atleast a year's time on the contest....i really mean it.

loved it

all the best and take care

A sequel to my favorite poem. Wow. No one can do it better. You ROCK!!!

Sad and beautiful. Impeccable rhythm and rhyme. Perfect sequel to part 1. This 2 part masterpiece is my favorite and along with Poet's Pen are 3 of the best poems I have ever read in my life. AWESOME!!!!
100,000/5

Wow Debbie, I love all your poems. Very nicely written, the flow as well as the structure was great. I loved your word choice as well. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

An amazing sad poem. You really have incredible talent.
Just wonderful.

HOLY SHIT.
wow.
wow.
wow.

Amazing!

Very good write. beatifully dark. 5/5 from me.

GREAT PEOM!

This is so amazing. U R Talented!

Wow this is a really great poem... you are extremely talented!! keep it up .xx

I'm too speechless to comment but I'll still give it a shot. The writing was very descrpitive, passionate in its own way, speaks for itself. Amazing job.

It was beautiful. Filled with so much emotion. I love this. If I could go higher than a five, I would give it a ten. I really would.

This poem is really awesome. Very descriptive and heartfelt. Loved it.

"Close your eyes, inhale my thoughts
Quench my desire, no count the cost
One beat alone, a dream of two
Through blackest night, the light of you"
Seems to say so much to me yet leaves me so alone......awesome 100/5...so beautiful....

Oh wow Debbie...

"Prayers unanswered heaven weeps
As pouring drops the sadness seeps
The Mystic wanders lost once more
To search another distant shore"

My fave stanza of all and it was no easy feat to pick it out.
You write so so beautifully..
5/5
*Gem*

I love this poem!!!!!

"Desiring what can never be, surrendering loss to destiny" <-- oh how i loved those lines. so much emotion and power. this was a beautiful follow up from part one. the imagery portrayed in this is stunning. coupled with a flawless flow and written with such beauty and grace, you outdid yourself here. as for the ending, what can I say? it was amazing. in my opinion, this is superior to part one, and i'm certainly looking forward to reading part three.