I like this poem alot, It is really quite fabulous. I like how you used good long words but also know what you are talking about at the same time. I think though with your tittle, you went abit of track perhaps? maybe you need to change your name to something like "I long For Everything In You" or "Memory" you get the drift. I like it though so very deep and truthful, good luck and good work,
Hidden,
Cheers,