Wow I found this a very short and at the same time very lovely...sometimes short poems are the best 5/5 keep it up.

I liked this, but not as much as your other poem that I commented on. As it went on it seemed to get a bit sloppy, as if you put more effort into the first half. Oh and in this line:

"I can not remember when we last kissed" - 'can not' should be all one word 'cannot'.

Anyhow, overall it was a decent job. 4/5.

It rather is a fine piece of work. Amusing to know how a poem about a lost love made me smile right at its ending. =] Bittersweet to say the least. all the best and take care.