This flowed beautifully... really, I'm pretty impressed. The rhyming scheme was good as well. It's really cute lol. 5/5

marcella

Very nice good, job, short poem but still very great poetic piece,

This...was beautiful!
The flow worked really well, the first stanza was such a great opener and it just kept getting better and better.
Awesome work!

Thats sad when love yyou have jsut ends..nothign you could do to keep it going it just stops. if this is true im sry but you are a great writer...kee[ it up.

melissa