Comments : Roadside Mayhem

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job.....Glad to see you were able to do this one...lol

    I know you won't believe this
    But my luck is up to par
    It seems his "WHEELS" were hotter
    Than the day He stole my car

    Excellent!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is cool-especially since it was a challenge. I like the song references(Prince's Little Red Corvette & Bruce Springsteen's Pink Cadillac). This was well done and amusing.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Well done Jeanie
    That was unlike any other poem i've ever read, lol
    Excellently written
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nicely done....very clever. Sometimes difficult to write for a challenge and with restrictions, but you did it well....enjoyed it!

  • 17 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    Wow thats so cool how u used them... very nice poem too by the way .xx