Waw...if only i had those magical words to describe the beauty in ur poem i would do it gladly..its one of the best poem i have read for a very long time...it touches the readers heart and in so many ways people can relate to it...u have made a clear picture of wat u were trying to say..great job..

Wonderful poetry.

It is nice but i feel in this poem pain
By the way I read your comment first thanx for comment me. Actually I like writing but my english is not good. Could you help me.

Waw, i can feel your passion and love for words. I've came across your poems for the fist time today and it makes me eager to read more, all i can say thanks for sharing your words, kel.