It was such a pleasure too write this with you Dost...You made it fun...I hope we can do this again in the future. You matched everything I wanted to hear...Excellent job....I was extremly lucky to have had the chance to work with such a talented writer as yourself.

Your heartbeats are breaths i take
Your tears just pass my lips by
Touch your heart to feel my love
Flow with destiny, never ask why?

I loved the way you ended this. Thank you for this gift.
Love your Dost Cindy

Awesome job by you and Cindy! Great transition between the two of you....beautiful and moving... a joy to read.....loved the ending:

Your heartbeats are breaths i take
Your tears just pass my lips by
Touch your heart to feel my love
Flow with destiny, never ask why?

Absolutely beautiful! All the best, Debbie 5/5

This is a remarkable poem. Superbly written. Both of you did an excellent colaboration. Each and every single stanza stands out. Keep it up.

This is such a beautifully written, breathtaking poem, not much more to say really 5/5

That is a beauitful dedication, we all feel cindy's heartache, wonderful work and i'm sure he is sending his love to her in everyway possible.

Exactly what I told Cindy. I truly loved this poem. It was amazing. You both had me crying!! Beautiful write! 5/5!

-` Liz

Cindy and End of Eternity - wow - that poem was so beautiful that I sat at my work desk with tears in my eyes. I guess maybe its because the biggest fear I face in my life is loosing my husband at some stage in our lives and me wishing to be with him. It was so beautifully written that, although I still have fear, I hope that when death does separate us temporarily we can still talk like this to each other and know the other one is there for us still. Many thanks for the read. Moira (I've added you both to my favourites as I truly enjoyed this read).

This was such a beautiful poem. Really very touching.

You guys truly did an outstanding job on this one.

Very nice and touching write. i know it means the world to cindy. 5/5

Oh my God. that was soo good. this is one of the best poems ive read this morning. such meaning behind it. a very touching write. u no how to capture a readers heart. very sad write also. good job to the both of u! xx

I'm sorry for your loss. This is a great tribute to someone so special, one to be proud of. Well done to the both of you and best wishes :)

I just commented on Cindy's with two of my fave poets did a collab! Yay!
lol
But seriously, you both did an amazing job on this poem and you should both be so very proud
5/5
*Gem*

Beautifully penned collaboration! The flow was good and the two points of view were as well. Excellent job!