She screamed goodbye

by Sarah   Mar 1, 2007


She`s the girl in the corner,

Cutting her wrists from what you caused her.

She lies and cry`s those tears dripping from her eyes.

She was never your 'girl',

She was just like a toy for you to play with like a 4 year old boy.

You hugged her and held her tight,

Just because you wanted her that night.

She found out why you hugged her tight, and told her 'she was the love of your life'

Then she sat in that corner and closed her eyes pulled the trigger and screamed *goodbye*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    This is a beautiful poem Sarah.. I can definitely feel the emotions dripping from it. With how you say things, I can just imagine the entire story... a young girl in the corner of a dark room, crying and cutting her wrists... just wishing for death to take her from this cruel world of ours. I love it, I can just relate to this in so many ways.
    One thing though, is that you need to fix up the way you do your sentences.. I'm not being rude or anything, but I thing it'd be a lot nicer if you didn't have such big spaces in between your sentences. Still loved it though, you get a 5/5! <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~

  • 17 years ago

    by Tiffany

    OH MY GOD....THIS STORY IS HORRIBLE! GREATLY WRITTEN AND SHORT AND STRAIGHT TO THE POINT...I LOVED IT! WOW I'M SPEECHLESS...WHICH IS DEFINITELY A GOOD THING CAUSE IT RARELY HAPPENS! GREAT POEM:-)

    XOXOX TIFF

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