OH MY GOD....THIS STORY IS HORRIBLE! GREATLY WRITTEN AND SHORT AND STRAIGHT TO THE POINT...I LOVED IT! WOW I'M SPEECHLESS...WHICH IS DEFINITELY A GOOD THING CAUSE IT RARELY HAPPENS! GREAT POEM:-)

XOXOX TIFF

This is a beautiful poem Sarah.. I can definitely feel the emotions dripping from it. With how you say things, I can just imagine the entire story... a young girl in the corner of a dark room, crying and cutting her wrists... just wishing for death to take her from this cruel world of ours. I love it, I can just relate to this in so many ways.
One thing though, is that you need to fix up the way you do your sentences.. I'm not being rude or anything, but I thing it'd be a lot nicer if you didn't have such big spaces in between your sentences. Still loved it though, you get a 5/5! <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~