This is great! it flowed so nicely. and had a great message! sad, but wonderfuly written. 5/5

~Kristina

Hard to figure out if i liked this poem or not, i think the idea was wicked, and some of the lines really jumped out at me but at the same time i found it a wee bit all over the place. awesome all the same :)

much love and many kisses,
bex

Yeah umm very good poem, strong meaning... i loved it actually good work bud, 5/5

I thought it was original and good it had a lot of good and weak parts i mean more good then weak if that makes any sence lol definitly one of your better ones

Hey,
I really liked the originality of this poem. Ive never read anything like it. It displays real emotion and the meaning is there and so powerful. The flow worked very well and the rhyming was good. You did an excellent job with this one and if im truthful i prefer this one to the one i read before. But again i htought the structure of the poem could be improved. I thought it would of worked betetr if it was just split into a few stanzas. Like hello in the first one, hey in the next and so on. But this is just me. Keep it up, youve got talent! xx

This is a very good poem, :). And to be sincere, I have - as well as "Contemplating Suicide", never read a poem like the one you have written.
You seem to have a talent for poetry, and I anticipate reading more of your poetry.
Also, you should check out my poetry.
All things considered - good poem. :) 5/5

Wow!
this is an unusual style.
it is really wonderful. i like the transitions. you have an amazing style. and a way with words.
fantastic job!
i really love this one.
favorites.

Lexie