Very pretty and I found it very well written, like it a lot but not as much as the one before but still good 4/5

This piece is as always... superb. You kept me engaged and I like the structure of the poem plus the beautiful meanings in it. tc

Beautifully written, with great descriptions, I like every stanza. You created vivid imagery through the poem.
Well done, 5/5 from me

I was so alone in your city
^I like this line, you created powerful atmosphere.
This piece looks too much like a story and not like a poem. 4/5

Anohter very very good SAD Poem with real feeling of love.....:) Excellent Job done by you....:)

Wow it was so breathtaking
I felt inside of this poem
Good job hun,
Laura

Wow! another heartfelt peice! again, wonderful use of repetition. i like the way you repeat the same lines but interchange them. great job.

I felt the feeling, The flow was great, amazing!!

Great but sad poem but still very nice...

This poem is really good, it is actually better than good, it is excellent... I mean...you told quite a story and we were there..all with you...watching outside of window from plane...Alone in you city...I felt like this when I was India. I was there in the airport of Delhi..after seeing Taj Mahal..Aww..this reminds me so much about the situation..

Wow this poem is so heartbreaking and touching. I read it before and thought I left a comment but I must've forgot or thought I did! I liked the title and the theme throughout the poem..

My favorite stanza is:

Time came to say good bye
My lips were locked for a second
I saw you last time and gone
I was so alone in your city

It really touched me because there are so many moments when you want to say something but the words don't seem to come out. It reminded me of one of those moments.

Extremely well done!

Really nice job..i enjoy reading it and the title was marvelous.keep up the good work=)