Wow this is really good. i think you did a great job on writing it. it's sad, but full with emotion. keep it up! 5/5

~Kristina

Very good flow. i like it. keep it up and keep it real!

Omg.. i absolutely loved this!!! i wanted to paste down which verse i liked best but i couldnt choose just one. they were all perfect!!! well done hun

much love and many kisses,
bex

I dont know it was good but a little weird haha the whole Novacain thing... but it all made sense dont get me wrong. Good job and keep up the good work 5/5

It was good I didnt really understnad some of it but it was alright I liked this it was sad