:(...that was soo sad...but i loved it...i could feel a deep saddness coming from it...it expressed alot of emotion...great

I love this one. i can almost feel the pain, it sounds so truthful... like someone was acually writing that for me to read.

This poem was great i loved it

Oh my gosh...
This was so sad...yet such a pleasure to read.
The depth in this overwhelmed me, the imagery was fantastic and the flow wonderful.
P.S If you ever need to talk, you know where I am.

Whoa! this poem had a lot of emotion. it was amazing, in a sad kind of way.

5/5 David

Please tell me that you just wrote that.. b/c you dont need to kill yourself its really seriously not the way to go.. i should know... i used to cut.. but seriously.. DONT KILL YOURSELF.. b/c I know i don't know you but I would cry... even if this is the only thing i ever send to you.. just know that this makes me sad.. I think you should keep writing though...
-chelsea

Thanks for you comments, this is amazing, my friend felt like this =/ she tried to kill herself... but we've kept her afloat thank goodness, the words are brilliant and emotion just flows through, well done!

Wow...that is very sad, yet very good...there's a lot of emotion that fills your heart with words so true!....i loved it, good job :)

Excellent poem, it was great, had emotion in it,also i could relate 2 it, 5/5

Omg wow this is intense....beautifully written, so sad and tragic though, I've been there, but I made it through....still a great poem...!! 5/5