Wow i just felt like i'm on an island just me,especially those made me feel that feelings

The waves out on the ocean
As they break upon the sand
The thrilling of the birds
Foot steps on the dry land

Yea good job,well done
See ya
Laura

This had a great flow to it also. Though the last in the third stanza doesn't to fit that flow lol. it may be the way I'm reading it. Anyway this was a wonderful read! 5/5

marcella

This was a beautiful poem. So much imagery. Good job 5/5

Wow! that was wonderful! i don't even know what to say! i don't usually ready poems about nature, but i loved this one! wow you are talented. i loved the rhyming in it and the whole poem! 5/5

~Kristina

This was so beautiful.
The imagery you used was fantastic, it created vvid pictures for me.
The flow was flawless. You did a wonderful job on this.

Really beautifully written.
I enjoyed all the imagery you used:)

keep up the good work.
5/5

I love your poem.
And thank you for the your comment

That is awesome. i read it outloud and ur poems are the ones u could read over and over again!

Excellent poem girl! I enjoin reading every single one of your poems.

Really nice....great imagery, flow and rhyming....

"The rain upon my windowsill
The wind outside my door
So many sounds surround me
Yet I always search for more"

^ beautiful in so many ways.....very deep and expressive

Enjoyed this one...keep up the great writing...will definitely read some more of yours Allison!