Aww wow amazing job. it's a really sad poem, but it's reall deep and that's what i like about it! 5/5

~Kristina

I love acrostic poems and you need a really nice job with this one. The rhyming was a little off, not that it matters cause the poem itself still had a reallly great flow. wonderful read! 5/5

marcella

Very short but very nice, Good poem, great story, keep it up, 5/5!

Wow, you used your name to do this one. What a neat idea.
Nice job.