Dying Inside

by Kristina   Mar 1, 2007


I'm not happy, but I fake it.
I act like nothings wrong, but inside my world has fallen apart.
I wanna break down and cry, but I stay strong.
I can't stand the pain, but I act like every things alright.
I wanna tell someone wants wrong, but no one will listen to me.

No one understands me or the shit I'm going through.
No one cares about me or the things I do,
No one would care if I were to die,
No one would miss me or even cry.

Copyright © February 2005 - Kristina M

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  • 17 years ago

    by I Love You

    Wow this is really good. i liked the flow of it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by bmichelle

    I love ur poems!!! they r great and show a lot of emotion. in this poem especially i think i know wat ur talking about, iv had lot of pain myself, and i will promise u, there will never be somthing that u can not handle

  • 17 years ago

    by Annabel

    People do care about you. I feel like this sometimes, but you'll come out the other end, you'll be suprised how many others feel like this tbh .. xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    I think a lot of ppl are like this, well i know i am some times. a fake.

    brought out a lot of true emotion, i feel for you.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    I like where you're going with this poem however, have you thought about doing it line by line like

    I'm not Happy.
    But I'll fake it.
    Act as though nothings wrong,
    but truth is my worlds torn apart

    etc

    its just a different arrangement, something to think about =]

    I like it.
    but know, that you really are not alone when you have the fishbowl at your beck and call okay?

    much love

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