Together In Heaven

by oddi tea   Mar 1, 2007


Why do I feel
My heart like this?
I just wanted,
A little kiss.

Why is it
That Im always hurt?
I just wanted
To wear her shirt.

Why is it that
This world is so cruel?
I swear it wasn't
My own tool.

Now she hates me
And walks away.
I wish she would listen
To what I say.

I told her I loved her,
Now this is true.
I just want her,
But she wants you.

Your body so fine,
It makes her stare.
I just wanted her ,
To know me there.

So five years pass,
And she still doesnt know.
I just wanted her,
To help me grow.

Later in life,
She figures it out.
I just wanted,
To scream and shout.

I just saw her,
I should have known.
I had told her,
What shouldve shown.

Now shes dead,
He took her away.
Ill see her forever,
In heaven one day.

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  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Awww. this was really sweey. And sad, but really just wow excellent. good work 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow your poem is flawless. I loved the way you rhymed it. I felt that the words really came from your heart and not just made up as you went along. That was full of emotion and I loved the ending. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by annette sigala

    Hey this is a good one... i love it keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Gypsy

    Loved it, it was really emotive and touching, the rhyme and flow were perfect and it was altogether a great poem =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    The flow in this poem was great!!! i loved this poem

    So five years pass,
    And she still doesnt know.
    I just wanted her,
    To help me grow.

    Now shes dead,
    He took her away.
    Ill see her forever,
    In heaven one day.

    ^those were my 2 favorite stanzas... great job, and 5/5 from me.... thanks for the comments too :]

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