Awe. Such a sweet dedication to your boyfriend. :] So beautiful. It flowed really well & nothing seemed forced at all.

The world seems s to be the best it has been.

^ There's an extra 's' after seems.. i don't think it should be there. O.o unless I'm wrong. haha

I never knew that you're help me see.

^ Um.. I don't get this line ;[. Maybe it should be : I never knew that, you help me see. Or I never knew that you you're here to help me see.. Idk Lol.

You're peaceful and indulgent hand I hold.

^ This should be: 'Your' not 'You're'

BUT. I realy reallyyyy do like this.

It was seriously uh-maze-ingg.

So freakin' sweet, dear.

Bri [x]