Whoa. I can see this being read with drums on the side. You know how they do it in movies? I mean like that. This is so cool. This is the first poem I've read of yours I really love it. I'm going to add you on my favorites. Check out some of my poems, kay?

Wow. really.. interesting. different than im used to reading.. its sorta haunting. 5/5 good job.

A very spirited and good poem. i liked it alot

your servant:
david

This poem was so unique. Its style was different than most of the others written for the same genre. I like that because it sets it apart. Great job.