by Daz Mellow Mar 2, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Look at me now, |
by Fan Angeleo
This poem I can come to on days when Iam feeling down, great job. |
by JASON
Like your poem, i know what you feel an mean as i'm going trough it my self, good luck and keep writing |
I really like it, I agree I know what you mean completely, boys are such jerks. most of them. Well you could fix up the grammar and use the commas and full stops in the right places... |