I really like it, I agree I know what you mean completely, boys are such jerks. most of them. Well you could fix up the grammar and use the commas and full stops in the right places...
other wise it rocks
I am glad that you learnt your better without him.

Like your poem, i know what you feel an mean as i'm going trough it my self, good luck and keep writing

This poem I can come to on days when Iam feeling down, great job.