Very nice I like it alot, when I first saw the name i thoguht it would be a comedy poem, But this was a great serious poem I love it, great flow great rhimeing, you did a good job on this, 5/5

Wonderful poem, beautifully penned, I love how you are having a one sided conversation with the Bartender. Your flow and choice of words in great. I also like all the raw emotion you put into it, it's so heart wrenching, made me tear up a little.. 5/5 wonderful job!!
Much Love,
<3 Danielle

Mm. i loved this poem. your did greatly!!! i wonder what it is like to be a bartender. it seems like they learn so much from other realtionships, i wonder if they actually have good realtionships themselves, and if they give good advice...

i was looking at your contest...what is with the Cannot Enter People. Why can't they?

Wow. Awesome. Sounds like an elton john song lmfao! I really like it, how you made it seem as if the main "character" was so hopeless that all he had was his beer. It seems you put your heart in it, and it shows. I did not recognize any spelling errors, and besides the fact that it is an odd and original topic to write about, the poem is virtually flawless.
Great job.
5/5
~Stephen white

Very nice. I loved this. It flowed pretty well & was just so beautifully written. The emotion in this was so deep & strong. The sadness just poured out of this.

My goal here tonight,
Is to erase every living memory,
Of the man I so dearly loved,
I gave everything I had to him, yet he left me in the end.

^ My favorite stanza. It really captivated me.. Idk why. It was just, so beautiful.

Bartender One More Glass Of Whiskey.

^ I absolutley LOVED the title of this. It really brought me in. Idk why. It was just so captivating.

Amazing job.

Bri x

I dont like "to make his image go away again" on the last line. i think the poem would end really well without that there, but it was a wicked poem all the same! well done
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

I love it! One of my favorite poems!