Wow i really love its poem i can feel the pain involed in it i really hope u find what u r looking for in life and in love... i hope u find ur happiness take care
robyn xoxo

Nitpicky: "you're" should be "your"

Well since that's out of the way, GREAT WORK! I loved it. It was very emotional and raw. The last stanza was definately my favorite. And something funny

"When you walked away"

Reminded me of a certain poem I wrote ;)

Lol i didn't think you did. :)