I Gave You My Heart [Shadorma]

by Kristina   Mar 2, 2007


I gave you
my heart cause I thought
I could trust
you with it
But I guess I was just wrong
You tore it apart.

Copyright © March 01, 2007 - Kristina M

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  • 17 years ago

    by I Love You

    I never saw a poem like this before. keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    I don't know, you might be. but i have to say that it was a great little poem thing anyway. lol.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Yeah you did it right lol
    This was beautiful.
    You managed to convey so much emotion in this.
    I love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    A shadorma is a syllabic poem. It consists of 6 unrhymed lines, syllables going: 3-5-3-3-7-5

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