A shadorma is a syllabic poem. It consists of 6 unrhymed lines, syllables going: 3-5-3-3-7-5

Yeah you did it right lol
This was beautiful.
You managed to convey so much emotion in this.
I love it!

I don't know, you might be. but i have to say that it was a great little poem thing anyway. lol.

5/5 David

I never saw a poem like this before. keep writing