Comments : Goodbye

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Hun.
    Wow.
    That was heartbreaking... =[ You put strong emotions into the poem & when read it clearly shows. The flow was flawless & the descriptions were beautifully done.

    "Goodbye is too uncertain
    Will I see you once more?
    Will I hear your voice again?"

    ^ My favorite lines. B/c as much we hate them, all that you stated is true. Wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by Alexx

    Wow.......this is such an amazing poem.... its so sad... yet so true.... 5/5 honestly just amazing

  • 17 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great poem, you got 5/5 here,nice,neat,it's crisp,purely done,the author is really inspired. Again,good job!

    ray