Hun.
Wow.
That was heartbreaking... =[ You put strong emotions into the poem & when read it clearly shows. The flow was flawless & the descriptions were beautifully done.

"Goodbye is too uncertain
Will I see you once more?
Will I hear your voice again?"

^ My favorite lines. B/c as much we hate them, all that you stated is true. Wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Wow.......this is such an amazing poem.... its so sad... yet so true.... 5/5 honestly just amazing

Great poem, you got 5/5 here,nice,neat,it's crisp,purely done,the author is really inspired. Again,good job!

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