by Lolpez Mar 2, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Blue |
I agree witht he writer above, the pace drew me in like a metronome. I really like the 'pool of sunshine' and the calm yet...desperate feel. |
by Bonnie Rose
This is really effective because of the pace..it gives it a really dramatic feeling and i really like the truth of the raw words |