Comments : Under the tree

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    This was a good poem. The rhythm and flow was short and sweet.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Beautiful poem and I accept your offer! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    It was a desire to be forever with you,
    a desire to stick with you like glue.

    ^^ lol aw thats cute. This was a really sweet poem, great message and flow.

    Take Care:)

  • 17 years ago

    by whatzupplz

    I really like the rythem of the poem very well written keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Adel my little bro,

    Such a sweet little love poem by you!
    I really love the last two lines...so cute.
    I hope she stays with you forever!

    Greetings from you big sis,

    5/5 Ingridxx