Marine corps

by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup   Mar 2, 2007


This is the life we chose
And each one of us knows
This is not like before
We have to explore
This is for all of those
That rose
To live hardcore
And fight in the war
Each one grows
And goes
Although the battle is a chore
The marines dont care anymore
The fight for your rights I suppose
With there matching clothes
So open the door
For the marine corps

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    Beautifully written nice job
    Take care
    xoHSxo

  • 17 years ago

    by umbra

    Exactly! It seems the marine corp. is something personal to you. Perhaps you might encompass all of the armed forces. They are all the digits that work together to make grabbing our dreams possible.

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This was a very unique kindoff poem! but i loved it... u really got your ways with words... keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by supaflyhonkyguy

    This is a good poem, something seems missing. not sure what but in no way is this a bad poem. try to get some imagery words in there to tell just how heartless or ruthless the marines are trained to be. just a suggestion

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    I quite liked this!!! very unique

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

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