This is a wonderful poem...enjoy love while you have it...Then you'll always have your memories....Excellent job!

How could life for me go on
with our souls living apart
How could my once meaningful life
mean anything without my heart

Great stanza.
Take care Cindy

Nicely done. Love has a way of opening up a whole world of worries....but a whole universe of happiness! Nice rhythm and rhyme....excellent. All the best, Debbie

But just as quick as happiness comes
there looms the kiss of death
to take away his warmth and love
with death's menacing, threatening breath

very nicely written indeed, its an human tendency to be scared of losing the ones you love the most, but in my opinion you enjoy every second and be glad to hv him rather than scared of losing him...coz only good people deserve good.

great write indeed

all the best and take care

Awwww. thats really sweet! i know how you feel...even though...i'm not sure if its love. i really like this though! 5/5

xo kisses xo

Wonderful piece. Its amazing how fears can come but hardly ever go. I understand this alot for i fear the exact same thing. A sweetly written poem. Loved it alot. Good effort ~mel