Very very very nice. i can def. relate to all of it because im goin through it right now.

"
Even your lips felt like dust on my tongue,
When we played out YOUR moment of glory.
Why should it feel right when it's obviously wrong?
For my destiny is just not you - I'm sorry."

that stanza was amazing, and i love how u ended the poem. great write. 5/5

I keep reading it and it gets better evry time. best break-up poem ever!!!