Comments : Don't you dare,,*

  • 17 years ago

    by dsadf

    Wow.
    That was amazing. When I read the poem, it felt like you were reading my mind at times.

    "I'm sorry I'm not the girl everybody expects me to be
    But you don't have to drown me in my imperfections"

    ^ My favorite stanza, simply because I feel this way. People hold high standards for me & when I don't meet them they put me down for it. Wonderful poem! Keep writing! 5/5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.