Wow dude, great job on this as acrostic is my favorite style of poetry. i have voted this poem for poetry contest.
great job once again.

That was wonderfull and beautiful!
Keep up the awesome work!
God bless 5/5
Thank you for the rate and comment!

<3Tayy

Joe, this was one of your better writes. That is an opinion of course, like all things that spill out of my mouth ;) One of your first uplifting love poems, first I've read from you at least, and a style often difficult to embrace and achieve such full storyline, without an abrupt conclusion. 5.5

Nicely done.....but you do these acrostics so well! 5/5

Looking for an answer that didn't exist
Looking for someone to love, when really I was loved all along
___

^ I love how you ended this. I don't really have much to say. I think some of your best poems are your acrostics!! don't stop writing! 5/5

-` Liz

Wonderful job on this poem. The message you have given with it is great.

Tears don't fall
Embedded they are
And no matter what
Rounds the corner
Somebody cares for you

I really loved this part!
Take Care Cindy

Hey not bad I like it, good work!

This was good I love acoustic poems they are so tricky. love it peace

Life goes on

Sure they fall, the water cycle just brings them back up is all :D

Hey babe,
This is pretty good. I like how you just continue to take the straight forward approach. I also am a fan of a good acrostic poem. Thanks for sharing this.

--Sher

Another great poem.
Your a really good writter.
5/5

~Chelsea

This poem is so true, Joe! People tend to think about all the people that don't care about them, but they are blind to the fact that they are cared by at least one person. A pleasure to read, thank you.

Hatori
unreachabledreams

Good job on this form. What an inspirational message. A joy to read!

Really nice!!
5/5

God bless u

This is real good work i cant really make and judgements as they will only be stupid to someone as good of writer as you lol, i can though say how i felt whilst reading it, which was sweet and calm :D

xxx alex xxx

I usually dont like acrostic poems, but this one is good, it has a clear message and hope you win the contest you wrote it for.

When i looked at your list of poems, i was curious about this one, because the title remembered me of a song by bullet for my valentine...as i read the poem i was wonderfully surprised by seeing that with the same title, you managed to write a poem far much better than one of my fav. songs...

but i guess the beauty of the poem can speak for itself...
5/5

*isabel*

Enjoyable read. The final stanza was perfect and concluded the poem well. Short but with meaning. Only suggestion is to correct spelling error weather=whether. 5/5

This was a really good poem. I love acrostic poetry. By the way what inspired you? Was it the Bullet For My Valentine song "Tears Don't Fall"? I don't know I'm just guessing